Post by Thius on Aug 12, 2006 3:54:01 GMT -5
Well I started writing this at like 2 in the morning so lets see how good I did...oh kam this means correct it please...
~~~The night war breeze drifted through the trees, gently rocking window shutters on a small run down home that looked as if it hadn't been used in ages. Inside this home an old man woke with a start. Had he read the message correctly? He thought to himself. Lifting his head he waited. He had. Gathering his traveling cloak from the floor and tightening it around him, he strode out into the night.
* * *
Many leagues away the nights silence was broken by a little cry. The first and last child of the House of Vassar had been began his life in the world. His mother smiled down at him as she died. The Lee Vassar watched his wife leave this world while he held this tiny new baby. His name was too be Ryan. Lee's tears now dripped into his beard as he went to the window with his son sleeping in his arms.
He watched the sun raise, he called for Ryan's (Nurse? Keeper?) Nivva. "Nivva watch after Ryan till Kane comes for him," Lee tells Nivva "Don't let him be hurt." Lee gently hands his son to Nivva who replies "Of course Sir." Nivva knew what Lee was going to do now. She watched him mount his horse and ride of to create enough time for Ryan to prepare for his destiny.
Only after Lee had gotten far enough away he looked back from the peak of a small hill were he could barely make out his home and pulled out his sword. He pointed it directly at the sun and sang. Without warning a great thunderclap of noise swallowed up Lee up. He was gone, but his protection he had given his son by giving his own life would be the only way that when the time came Ryan would be ready.
~~~
I know its not super good but hey at 2 in the morning.
~~~The night war breeze drifted through the trees, gently rocking window shutters on a small run down home that looked as if it hadn't been used in ages. Inside this home an old man woke with a start. Had he read the message correctly? He thought to himself. Lifting his head he waited. He had. Gathering his traveling cloak from the floor and tightening it around him, he strode out into the night.
* * *
Many leagues away the nights silence was broken by a little cry. The first and last child of the House of Vassar had been began his life in the world. His mother smiled down at him as she died. The Lee Vassar watched his wife leave this world while he held this tiny new baby. His name was too be Ryan. Lee's tears now dripped into his beard as he went to the window with his son sleeping in his arms.
He watched the sun raise, he called for Ryan's (Nurse? Keeper?) Nivva. "Nivva watch after Ryan till Kane comes for him," Lee tells Nivva "Don't let him be hurt." Lee gently hands his son to Nivva who replies "Of course Sir." Nivva knew what Lee was going to do now. She watched him mount his horse and ride of to create enough time for Ryan to prepare for his destiny.
Only after Lee had gotten far enough away he looked back from the peak of a small hill were he could barely make out his home and pulled out his sword. He pointed it directly at the sun and sang. Without warning a great thunderclap of noise swallowed up Lee up. He was gone, but his protection he had given his son by giving his own life would be the only way that when the time came Ryan would be ready.
~~~
I know its not super good but hey at 2 in the morning.
