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Post by Topaz on Jul 7, 2006 14:33:22 GMT -5
People living in a place called cold sassey, all that has happened in the first ten chapters is their grandfather had his wife die and three weeks later married a girl that could be his daughter. But isn't this getting a little off topic?
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Post by Kate Valentine on Jul 7, 2006 23:49:46 GMT -5
*Shrugs* Truthfully...it doesn't really matter. lol...
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Post by Thius on Jul 19, 2006 1:17:41 GMT -5
You guys seem like you know each other is this just me or am I crazy because it might be a little bit of both! But yeah I couldn't even get through the first paragraph without being blown away by your ability to paint a picture in your readers mind. Okay but really it was good I've tried to write but never got very into it because I lacked some fundamentals.
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Post by Topaz on Jul 19, 2006 1:27:29 GMT -5
I wasn't lying to you Valentine, you are good. Thius you should post some of your stories in "other" then if you think it is not good I am sure advice would be freely given by people here. Myself included. I wanna see your writing style, it is so fun to see others writing styles
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Post by Thius on Jul 19, 2006 2:38:05 GMT -5
Ummm...I think I have deleted most of mine that makes me sad I geuss I will have to come up with some new ones you guys should check the Play Role World thing and check that out. It's definetly not my best! So don't judge me on that!
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Post by Topaz on Jul 19, 2006 2:48:58 GMT -5
That's not cool
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Post by Thius on Jul 19, 2006 3:03:01 GMT -5
Whats not cool I don't get it? Well why are we the only ones on. It seems we need to get more people to join! So lets find a way! HAHA! * Cough I'm Sorry I'll stop. Please don't get mad at me...
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Post by Kate Valentine on Jul 20, 2006 7:57:53 GMT -5
*Blush* I dunno...lol. I try to use what grammar skills I have. XD Yesh. Let's find a way to recruit writers to come here! ^_^
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Post by Topaz on Jul 20, 2006 14:08:56 GMT -5
Spelling has always been the biggie for me, if I spell something wrong it annoys me greatly. Grammar is decent, still a working progress.
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Post by Thius on Jul 20, 2006 18:49:04 GMT -5
Well I don't know wat annois yuo mor so I geus I wil tri my besst
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Post by Topaz on Jul 20, 2006 22:59:51 GMT -5
At least you capitalized the "W" in Well.
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Post by Thius on Jul 21, 2006 22:19:08 GMT -5
Lol I knew you would like that
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Post by Topaz on Jul 25, 2006 10:13:20 GMT -5
The sad thing is, is that is what my fathers spelling really looks like. He is always yelling my name just so I can help him spell.
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Post by Kate Valentine on Jul 27, 2006 18:30:11 GMT -5
That's hallerious. Honestly.
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Post by Thius on Jul 28, 2006 15:09:39 GMT -5
hilarious?
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